The overall quality of the animation is very, very good, but it definitely felt predictable on what was going to happen. Keep up the good work, though!

Very nice. Love the expression!

Overall it looks alright, but the two biggest issues I've spotted are the inconsistent anatomy and perspective/depth. It'd help a lot to use a horizon line in order to keep a room looking uniform. As for Tomato herself, she just lacks detail in areas compared to, say, her ass. My best advice is to let this piece serve as motivation for practice and improvement in private. You got this!

Very cute. You portrayed the style fairly accurately!